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Lunar Mirror

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Waves slip:
silver dependability
obscures tidal distortion
and children, heavy with sleep
drowse fitfully, chasing hopes
disguised as dreams where
astronauts explore and
parents love you:
no conditions.
This week my poetry group experimented with shape poetry, and we were challenged to write one about the moon.

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cerealnovels's avatar
This is done well. I enjoyed it.